Uhm. Part of a song

So I'm working on this song... it's a good one so far, but it's taking me a while, it doesn't have a name yet, but it's good nonetheless...

Verse:
She's sick of being alone
While everyone else gets what they want
She's sick of screwing up
So she wants to take her life
And she thinks
That maybe
If she ends her life
She won't hurt anymore
And she thinks
That maybe
If she gives it up
No one will care

Chorus:
And she sits
She sits alone at night
and wonders why she's blind
To everything she has in this world
And she rests
She rests her tired eyes
And she falls asleep at night
As her world keeps crashing down
Down on her
Won't you saver her tonight
While there's time


That's all I have so far... but it's coming along... I think this one's good... I dunno though.